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I'm trying to improve my essay writing skills (key word: trying) by, uh, writing essays. Since I studied the French Revolution this year, the topic was rather interesting: compare this 4 stage model of a revolution--a "classic revolution"--to the French Revolution. Here's the essay, if you're interested.
Also, holy cow, it's summer. It's so warm, and the little grey fleas are jumping all over the lawn, the roses are blooming, and the unripe strawberries are--as of yet--uneaten by the rabbits. I don't think we're going to get them, though. The rabbits always see them first.
Third of all: the brigits_flame prompt, symbiosis, only brings up memories of biology class. Mullerian and Batesian mimicry, mutualism/commensalism/parasitism/predation. And it's due on Saturday.
Essay. Length: approx 700 words.
If you find factual errors, wildly gross generalizations, or any other advice/criticism/things you want to tell me, feel free to do so. If you make it through. :)
Also, holy cow, it's summer. It's so warm, and the little grey fleas are jumping all over the lawn, the roses are blooming, and the unripe strawberries are--as of yet--uneaten by the rabbits. I don't think we're going to get them, though. The rabbits always see them first.
Third of all: the brigits_flame prompt, symbiosis, only brings up memories of biology class. Mullerian and Batesian mimicry, mutualism/commensalism/parasitism/predation. And it's due on Saturday.
Essay. Length: approx 700 words.
( Click for essay. Cut for length. Possibly also for boredom. )
If you find factual errors, wildly gross generalizations, or any other advice/criticism/things you want to tell me, feel free to do so. If you make it through. :)
